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Name: Bran
Breed Base: Giant Schnauzer
Age: 3 years
Gender: male
Abilities: none
Strengths: muscular front legs , very smart, resourceful, his personality makes it easy for him to do terrible things and not care.
Weaknesses: can see but very painful to open eyes, gets migraines if he does open them (reason unknown). he has an under bite so he has a weak bite. afraid of water. and weak (vulnerable) joints.
Personality: he always looks happy with his eyes closed and under bite but he is humorless and has no hope in society. he wants what he wants though and he will get it.
History: he live a good puphood because his mother was very resourceful and smart but something happened and she died one night and he was changed forever.
Likes: food and power, blood
Dislikes: others, his eyes, others thinking he is nice and trying to talk to him. water
Other: none
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
We're a little confused about Bran's first weakness. You say that it hurts for him to open his eyes. Why is that? One would assume that, pain or not, in a threat situation if he can see he would open his eyes to fully percieve the situation. Also, you say that he relies on hearing and smell. This is a little concerning because all too often someone making a blind (or as good as) character rely on their other senses is essentially their way of getting the character to see without eyes. Obviously this negates the weakness entirely.

If you could elaborate on this a bit more, we would appreciate it.
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VeryArtish Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011
i see your point, i didnt think of it what way, ill gladly revise it because i think good weaknesses leads to a good story :)
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, let us know when you've finished and we'll have another look.
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VeryArtish Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011
ok i changed it, i hope it balances alright now, i decided to keep him simple so he can develope through out the story.
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright, but remember to develop him during your audition, your opponents need something to work with. Best of luck.
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VeryArtish Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011
right, thanks
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It looks fine, you don't have to change it, but personality traits such as being smart and resourceful aren't strengths per se. In general we consider strengths to be purely physical. However, you don't really need to change it if you don't want to since he does balance out as he is.
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VeryArtish Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
ok i see, thanks :)
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